Milk Co.
194 Easterd Avenue
Netherlands
USA
194 Easterd Avenue
Netherlands
USA
Milton S
1632 Hershey town
Kingtown
USA
Dear Milton S. Hershey:
I am very pleased if you can to read some reasons that I think are important for this case about to sell or not to sell the chocolate factory:
If the resident of the town oppose the sale of Hershey Food maybe will have:
· The town and the company are closely linked.
· Tourists visit the town because of the “magic” created by its image of “chocolate town”.
· The buyer may cut jobs and this will be an economic disaster for the town.
· Many people in the trust are not from the town. They don’t understand that the residents are protecting a “way of life”.
Hershey was a model employer who built a town for his employees with comfortable homes, inexpensive public transport and good school. I don’t think that’s a good ideas to sell, I think you must abandonment its plans to sell.
It’s important you understand the points that were mentioned because it is a dilemma to take the best decision taking in to account the advantages and disadvantages.
I look forward to seeing you.
Yours Sincerely,
Gloria Salazar
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Milk Co.
194 Easterd Avenue
USA
Milton S
1632 Hershey town
USA
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I am very pleased if you can to read some reasons that I think are important for this case about to sell or not to sell the chocolate factory: Instead of this opening paragraph, you should clearly state your opinion about the sale. What you have written is nothing more than the points listed in your text. Please write your letter again.
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It’s important you understand the points that were mentioned because it is a dilemma to take the best decision taking in to account the advantages and disadvantages.
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